Bro you are trying but as a series there are gross inconsistancies in lighting (even in outdoor light can be controlled), posing and model comfortablity. She is uncmfortable smiling wide, it shows in her expression - never force a model outside this kind of comfort zone picture quality suffers. Her cheong sam does not seem to fit well - in a couple of shoots the top distorts making her look strange. Some photos are a little on the soft side and more so they would be OF. Exposure is painful in some, with face underexposed and carrying some tint color. I know this is not the response you are looking but learning to see the flaws in your own work is the hard thing to do.