An Early Morning at Construction Site


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kazeeee

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Shot this crane with sunrise as background.

Is the PP done on blue too much?
Does it look underexposed?

Any other comment would be greatly appreciated.


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picture is still a bit underexposed, i would think. the blues are a little murky and i'm not sure if you saturated them, but they are looking much too deep in tone.

maybe pump it up half a stop.

sometimes, less is more - the blackness at the bottom is not appealing to me, and is not a good example of negative space. i would go in closer.
 

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picture is still a bit underexposed, i would think. the blues are a little murky and i'm not sure if you saturated them, but they are looking much too deep in tone.

maybe pump it up half a stop.

sometimes, less is more - the blackness at the bottom is not appealing to me, and is not a good example of negative space. i would go in closer.
Agree with you.
Having similar shots like this many many times, I learnt to make less use of the lower part - usually the darker part to only about 10% across. The crane, which may be an interesting object; but a silhouette against the dark blue may not fit well, compared to a clearer orangy background.

Yes the blue seems saturated, but thats the way I would have done it myself, to my preference.
 

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Nice cloudscape but would be nicer if the crane was made to stand out against an orange background as cheguthamrin said.
 

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The skyscape is beautiful
but a lot of black spaces below make the photo look heavy at the bottom.
Anyway, it would be nice if you can rename your title to the "The Slanting tower".:)
 

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The blue is WOW! I love it! Saturated yes but it's so....so.... WOW. Especially the hue, you got it just right. Its melancholic yet made me smile. :thumbsup:
 

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