Alsagoff Arab School


biskandar

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Lighting
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Old School Feeling
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Interesting with the font old character and art arabian style
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
The art of the ancient school character

 

cabbySHE

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Composition...like the passport photo style.

Lighting ... very dull.

Without other supporting architecture, can't tell it is old feel.

Just like shooting a signage.

Lightning conductor and an eyelet should be removed.
 

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biskandar

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Thanks for the comment , dude .

It's suppose to be more bigger picture and yes i can feel it very dull also , thanks anyway .

Composition...like the passport photo style.

Lighting ... very dull.

Without other supporting architecture, can tell it is old feel.

Just like shooting a signage.

Lightning conductor and an eyelet should be removed.
 

tetrflare

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I dont think it is dull! Well taken. Composition does make it look like signage, but that is exactly the aim. The strong contrast of the words/sign to the light brown bg is good, and it stands out from the blue sky. Vignetting has a very positive effect here. Lightning conducter is part of the shot, if you have to take it with the sign, leave it in.


I think with a smaller size, it is easier to see the full picture on screen to better appreciate it.
 

biskandar

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Thanks tetrflare , appreciate your comments :)

I dont think it is dull! Well taken. Composition does make it look like signage, but that is exactly the aim. The strong contrast of the words/sign to the light brown bg is good, and it stands out from the blue sky. Vignetting has a very positive effect here. Lightning conducter is part of the shot, if you have to take it with the sign, leave it in.


I think with a smaller size, it is easier to see the full picture on screen to better appreciate it.
 

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