Is this picture okay to be given to
my sis as a present? Of course there's
a frame to be present as well. Well,
first try and need critique on this.
It is because is not nice to give if
got problem on this. Thank you.
I'm guessing this is your sister's child. So it really depends on the intended reaction that you would like from her.
It might probably be a better idea to have a few pictures of different expressions (ideally with some happy faces) and/or your sister's family.
As for the black and white picture(s), perhaps brighten the eyes and face with the dodge tool and pump up the contrast.