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i feel that #2 & #5 lack the grit, unlike the rest of the series esp #4 which is my fave of the lot.
that said, i have always enjoyed series that you put up. and this one is no exception. great work dude.
 

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i feel that #2 & #5 lack the grit, unlike the rest of the series esp #4 which is my fave of the lot.
that said, i have always enjoyed series that you put up. and this one is no exception. great work dude.
thanks. :)

where's the dancing?
:bigeyes::bigeyes:

title from a local author.. kelvin tan's book. :) have you read it before?
 

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thanks
err, me live in mountain, dunno about this book and author
hrm, nlb had a lot of copies when i was pretty young.. :)

but that's besides the point hurhur, i don't even know why i chose the thread title. the book has nothing to do with broken down things.. has more to do with a teenager finding a sense of self-worth and identity in singapore
 

Ayie1786

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nice series there.... i personally like pic #1... :thumbsup:
where was this taken at?
 

dingzyangz

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at first look #1 is good. when I saw #3, I decided my vote goes to it because of its simplicity and the mingling of the shadow and light is very well done. :)

great capture.
 

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I agree with inrewind, #2 and #5 lack the 'thing'.

Maybe a close-up of the sink for #2 would have done the trick.
 

Havoc

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I like #1, :thumbsup: good work dude.
I always enjoy viewing your photos. :)
 

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nice series there.... i personally like pic #1... :thumbsup:
where was this taken at?
at first look #1 is good. when I saw #3, I decided my vote goes to it because of its simplicity and the mingling of the shadow and light is very well done. :)

great capture.
I agree with inrewind, #2 and #5 lack the 'thing'.

Maybe a close-up of the sink for #2 would have done the trick.
I vote goes to #1 & #3 but with a bit more contrast would be better on this IMO.
I like #1, :thumbsup: good work dude.
I always enjoy viewing your photos. :)
thanks for the comments guys. :)
 

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I lv pic 1, 3 and 4.

pic 2 if got more light ray comes in will be even better imo.

pic 5 for me it is quite tight.

overall nice series...
 

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stop breaking into peoples house. Number one is awesome ... can't agree more with the composition and everything.
 

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I lv pic 1, 3 and 4.

pic 2 if got more light ray comes in will be even better imo.

pic 5 for me it is quite tight.

overall nice series...
stop breaking into peoples house. Number one is awesome ... can't agree more with the composition and everything.
thanks everybody. :)

part0 - agree. i wonder if there is a safe way to create smoke such that we can have light rays in all these houses. light rays only appear when there is smoke/mist. cheers!
 

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