abstract? please comment!


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dda95

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ermm.. newb experimental venture into shooting 'abstract' stuff.. tips for improving?
 

Witness

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dun know about the abstract factor....but 1 and 3 will make good landscape shots nonetheless....

btw....3rd shot in landscape will look even nicer.....
 

dda95

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hey.. thank you.. that's much better! more mood and 'feel' to the picture. makes the cloud stands out more :)

nopeee... dun mind at all. that's what photography is all about isn't it? experience and experimentation :D
 

user111

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technical issues aside..all the photos look good :thumbsup:
 

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dda95 said:
hey.. thank you.. that's much better! more mood and 'feel' to the picture. makes the cloud stands out more :)

nopeee... dun mind at all. that's what photography is all about isn't it? experience and experimentation :D
Your photo was good to start with. :thumbsup:
 

jonlou

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the 3rd picture's very very nice.... very nice blue.... very nice piece of cloud in the middle of the sky... :thumbsup:
 

dda95

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hey.. thank you guys.. really really appreciate your comments.. very encouraging! :) almost didn't post the third pic cos i tot it was too plain!
 

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do ignore my comments if you think they are a tad harsh, but i feel there isn't much "feeling" in your pictures.

imho, shots like these do not really evoke any emotion in me, and they look normal, with a pleasant background to match.

perhaps, a sense of motion (slow shutter, during high winds) or a picture taken at a lower angle (esp for first shot) will generate more than a 'first' look.

but a good effort, since you are a newbie. keep it up! :)
 

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dda95 said:
hey.. thank you guys.. really really appreciate your comments.. very encouraging! :) almost didn't post the third pic cos i tot it was too plain!
Hi dda95,

I too like the 3rd shot :thumbsup:
 

dda95

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Stefen said:
do ignore my comments if you think they are a tad harsh, but i feel there isn't much "feeling" in your pictures.

imho, shots like these do not really evoke any emotion in me, and they look normal, with a pleasant background to match.

perhaps, a sense of motion (slow shutter, during high winds) or a picture taken at a lower angle (esp for first shot) will generate more than a 'first' look.

but a good effort, since you are a newbie. keep it up! :)
dun worry! critique is very welcomed here! i'm still learning.. so it's one of the ways to improve :) i'd find my style one day..
 

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i like pic 3 too..... very nice... the look of the fence extending all the way to horizon....
 

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Ben1223 said:
I hope you don't mind. I converted 3rd photo to b&w. Just experimenting how it wld look.
I'll delete it if you tell me to.

Mmm. How come sometimes I can see the photo but sometimes cannot.
I can see those 3 pict. posted in the first post, but not this one. Why hur?

Thanks
Raymond
 

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