Abstract Black n White Series - le jardin secret

[Gosu_John]

Hi all,

Just completed this series of photos from a public housing estate garden. Its part of a university module requirement project we have to take as architecture students.

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Harsh Comments Welcome!!

 

[Robin]

Good job.... I especially like the close up shots......Great composition....You have the ability for black and whites...

Keep it up... :thumbsup:

 

[student]

A quick look. But good work!

 

[r0n9]

i like the close up of the snail.. but a pity that it wasnt captured fully..u missed out alittle of its ... feeler? at the left side of the photo.. and i thnk if a tighter crop on the photo of 3 guys (the white tee guy jumped off the chair), lesser space at the bottom of the photo may b impactful

nice photos~
juz my 2c worth..

 

[Gosu_John]

thank you all

regarding the snail pic bobian.. ahah i realised also about the feeler thing

and a tighter crop on the 3 guys pic? yea i should hor... maybe a 6 X 6?

 

[r0n9]

thank you all

regarding the snail pic bobian.. ahah i realised also about the feeler thing

and a tighter crop on the 3 guys pic? yea i should hor... maybe a 6 X 6?

heh go try go try.. den post for us to see

 

[Gosu_John]

heh go try go try.. den post for us to see

tried working around it but doesnt seem to get a good pic outta it. seems like thats the best i can do.

 

[GreenEggs_n_Ham]

i loved the orchid one..

hmm not true black and white i suppose? i see red hues... sepia even..

and.. did u try to make up for contrast by darkening the photos? editing the contrast?