A snail on tiles... how odd...


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owrwe

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Hi all!

It's my first post here. I'd like to know your opinion on the pic below.

Critiques welcomed! Thanks in advance!

 

slaam

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haha yah i think its cute too.. but suspect that if close up on snail will spoil the effect
now its emphasizing how small the snail is and how much dist it has to cover haha
just my two cents lah everyone differs...
but i feel that it can be brightened up .. now it jus looks bleak
 

foxtwo

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it would be compositionally better if the snail was placed near where the 2 line cracks of the tiles meet. when u have lines leading from one side of the frame to another, eyes are going to follow them. use that to your advantage.
 

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foxtwo said:
it would be compositionally better if the snail was placed near where the 2 line cracks of the tiles meet. when u have lines leading from one side of the frame to another, eyes are going to follow them. use that to your advantage.
yeah agreed. he could have moved the snail too ;)
 

owrwe

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all comments noted! :) Very encouraging indeed! Hehe!

just a note: waiting for the snail to move isn't easy, it was moving in all directions and i was in a hurry to go to work... didn't have time to set up or wait for the snail to pose.

no PP (just resized for upload), didn't have time... maybe some brightening and cropping could do the trick?

thx to all!
 

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