Hi guys...my first serious attempt at abstract photography. Any comments will be greatly appreciated. These pics were all taken at Neo Tew Rd. The abandoned HDB estate.
A series of abstract pics
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I dont know about the technical stuff.. but artistically, you have done a great work :thumbsup: I like the first pic particularly.
I am really impressed.
You have the 'eye'.
I am really impressed.
You have the 'eye'.
i think the shots work together. they look like close-ups of parts of the estate. seen together, you can get a feel of the texture of the place.
the tile shots look a bit like mondrian.
singly, the shots don't seem that striking to me.
the tile shots look a bit like mondrian.
singly, the shots don't seem that striking to me.
Hi...thanks for all your valuable comments. I have put them together thru photoshop. What do you guys think?
1. your pics are so large, take v long to download. maybe you could downsize them?
2. mondrian was an artist. mainly exploring colours, lines, proportions.
3. i think your pics have a gritty feel. thus the clean lines of your collage design (the black & red lines) don't really go with them. try something more rough-edged.
2. mondrian was an artist. mainly exploring colours, lines, proportions.
3. i think your pics have a gritty feel. thus the clean lines of your collage design (the black & red lines) don't really go with them. try something more rough-edged.
He is a abstract artist born in 1872-1944. Some of his famous work is the composition in colours and line ( The concept used in the city link underpass )
Hi all,
yes I have to agree the montage of pics don't work too well do they
Thanks for the kind comments and critiques and those info abt Mondrian! :thumbsup:
yes I have to agree the montage of pics don't work too well do they
Thanks for the kind comments and critiques and those info abt Mondrian! :thumbsup:- Status
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