A series of abstract pics


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iamasaint

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Hi guys...my first serious attempt at abstract photography. Any comments will be greatly appreciated. These pics were all taken at Neo Tew Rd. The abandoned HDB estate.







 

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I dont know about the technical stuff.. but artistically, you have done a great work :thumbsup: I like the first pic particularly.
I am really impressed.
You have the 'eye'.
 

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i think the shots work together. they look like close-ups of parts of the estate. seen together, you can get a feel of the texture of the place.

the tile shots look a bit like mondrian.

singly, the shots don't seem that striking to me.
 

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1. your pics are so large, take v long to download. maybe you could downsize them?

2. mondrian was an artist. mainly exploring colours, lines, proportions.

3. i think your pics have a gritty feel. thus the clean lines of your collage design (the black & red lines) don't really go with them. try something more rough-edged.
 

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Originally posted by iamasaint
By the way...what is mondrian?
He is a abstract artist born in 1872-1944. Some of his famous work is the composition in colours and line ( The concept used in the city link underpass )
 

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Hi all,

yes I have to agree the montage of pics don't work too well do they:) Thanks for the kind comments and critiques and those info abt Mondrian! :thumbsup:
 

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