A Pot of Gold

[kinky1971]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Was playing around with D90 and light. All comment welcome.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Able to take wonderful images in different lighting conditions.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Home @ night. Off all lights.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think this image is only ok. Lots of practices I need.

 

[kinky1971]

Apologise for the broken hyperlink. Fixed.

 

[nysheng]

i like the lines generated from the lamp, but the lens flare on the right and the top seems distracting.

were ur room lights off when u took the photo? seems a bit overexposed

 

[aprilmoon92]

interesting concept. however, perhaps you can move the lightsource away from the wall or use a fill in flash to remove the distracting shadows. hope it helps

 

[Kirmu]

maybe u can try using clone stamp in photoshop to remove the lens flare on the right

 

[redname]

interesting. how you do the streaks of light?

 

[kinky1971]

@Kirmu:
I am not good at photoshop; the image may turns out worse if I photoshop it. :sweatsm:

@redname:
I am not sure myself. :what: Just think if I off all lights and zoomed into the light source, may turned out something. Sure enough something! Too bad there is len flare and the reflection off the wall. Will do again when I have a 'fill in flash'

@nysheng:
Agreed. Exposed.

 

[haqeel]

i like it