A Lonely Boy


Status
Not open for further replies.
#1
Hi guys, hope u can give me some feedback on this picture i captured earlier today. It was near the Esplanade under the Benjamin Sheares Bridge. Found this boy sitting along eating while his mum sold drinks nearby. Hard to capture such things in Singapore already... =D



Shutter: 1/250
Aperture: f/4
Focal Length: 188 mm
ISO Speed: 400

Using 300D with a 70-200 f4 L
 

espion

Deregistered
Aug 25, 2005
1,524
0
0
#3
As it is, it is a good shot - luv the light, except maybe a tighter crop - or go nearer and cut off the red plastic bag - and a lower perspective.

But if you want to evoke pity or compassion, like being towed along by mum selling drinks under bridge to make a living, that is certainly not conveyed in the pic. You have to include the mum and her business if that is what you want to say.

But if you cannot include mum - maybe she is too far away, and that is why you can shoot the boy :) - then that cannot be said photographically, and all you have is a boy, which is sufficient on its own for a picture. You can leave your audience wondering who is he, why is he there, etc etc. He can be on a picnic with his family too.

Maybe he does look a little sad, and that adds to the intrigue in the picture, but for that we need to see more of his eyes, which either you wait or u go lower.

Not all things can be said photographically, just as not all things can be said in words. You have to say what a photograph can say, and not try to force a square peg into a round hole.
 

#4
As it is, it is a good shot - luv the light, except maybe a tighter crop - or go nearer and cut off the red plastic bag - and a lower perspective.

But if you want to evoke pity or compassion, like being towed along by mum selling drinks under bridge to make a living, that is certainly not conveyed in the pic. You have to include the mum and her business if that is what you want to say.

But if you cannot include mum - maybe she is too far away, and that is why you can shoot the boy :) - then that cannot be said photographically, and all you have is a boy, which is sufficient on its own for a picture. You can leave your audience wondering who is he, why is he there, etc etc. He can be on a picnic with his family too.

Maybe he does look a little sad, and that adds to the intrigue in the picture, but for that we need to see more of his eyes, which either you wait or u go lower.

Not all things can be said photographically, just as not all things can be said in words. You have to say what a photograph can say, and not try to force a square peg into a round hole.
thanks alot bro... noted
 

Stratix

New Member
Oct 13, 2005
936
0
0
#5
nice colors, compositionally near perfect.

would be perfect if the plastic bag wasnt chopped off. =)
 

Status
Not open for further replies.
Top Bottom