A learning attempt II Malgosia Pt2

[Chris Lim]

Here's the Pic some may have been waiting for. As usual, Comments and critiques welcomed. Harsh ones lagi welcomed. But please do tell me how to improve if you're gonna be harsh. Thanks.

 

[leejay]

^_^ Very cool!

Maybe um... you could crop away the top left corner or move closer...

 

[timmax]

Finally... I get to see the pic that I've been waiting for... Great shot bro :thumbsup:

 

[modelinn]

If the face is more visible will be a great pic, not sure if its OOF?

 

[osk77]

Yes! The pic we have been waiting for.

It does look soft (or OOF), was it your intention? Did you shoot it in MF? I can imagine the running water playing tricks on the AF

Maybe it is just me but the water in front of her left eye does get a bit distracting after a while.

All in all, I think it is brilliant, very creative. 9 (including Ivan, excluding Malgosia) of us there that day and only you thought of it :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

 

[Chris Lim]

:bsmilie:

Thanks for all the very kind words Bros. The overall shot was Done in MF cos i just couldn't get a good shot on Af due to the water. I think the slightly soft look was because of the glass between the water, and the model. I've tried to boost the contrast slightly and added a little grain to try and recover some details from the original already. Quite so the best i could bring out. Maybe i should have tried shooting a couple more ?:dunno: But then Again, if Malgosia did know i was shooting there i may not have gotten this shot too? :think:

Haha but nonetheless. It was a great shoot to begin with all thanks to Modelinn bro!