Nicely done. Frame within a frame. Though is it just me or is the image a little on the soft side? Not too sure if its intentional. And I'd personally do without the blinds on the top. It distracts a little from the frame within a frame concept. Then again, I do feel that is subjective. But a nice catch mate.
Ah I see. Well I don't think you need to take it out. In actual fact, why not push it some more? Then add a little color to the overall picture? Just a thought. Its a dreamy little scene, so perhaps can try pushing the boundaries a little more. You might like it. At the end of the day, you got to like your own work I feel. Despite what others say.