2 ladies of my life

[AuniStock]

Greetings to all photography enthusiasts.

Here is my 2nd post in Clubsnap, with my first one went totally wrong in the critique corner :cry:

Do mind my technique, in fact I appreciate all comments.

Shots of the 2 ladies of my life. Canon 50d with 18-55mm Canon IS lens (stock), no flash.

PP in photoshop; levels, saturation.

Capturing her first smile

Pin me to the wall

Till my station comes

 

[wdEvA]

hmm, is it just me? i dont see any photos

 

[tungtong]

hmm, is it just me? i dont see any photos

me too !

tungtong2009

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[Pearlang]

I can't see any pics either.

 

[billycadiz]

I can't sleep and I can't see any photos.

Hey bro, maybe this will help
http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94574

Cheers!

 

[cabbySHE]

one is the mother and the other is the wife, I suppose..what else ?

 

[AuniStock]

Sorry all. I have amended the image links.

Initially it as linked from picasa.

 

[Anson]

Cute baby...

 

[Octarine]

#1: I like the PP but a bit more yellow would be better, imho. Seems you have used flash, there is a harsh shadow under the chin. Hands are chopped off and face is centered, a different crop could work better.
#2: Nice snapshot. Can't see the meaning as described in caption.
#3: Good idea of capturing the dreaming mood but too many distracting elements around and the relation to 'station' or 'MRT' is not clear.
Read up about composition.

 

[AuniStock]

#1: I like the PP but a bit more yellow would be better, imho. Seems you have used flash, there is a harsh shadow under the chin. Hands are chopped off and face is centered, a different crop could work better.
#2: Nice snapshot. Can't see the meaning as described in caption.
#3: Good idea of capturing the dreaming mood but too many distracting elements around and the relation to 'station' or 'MRT' is not clear.
Read up about composition.

Appreciate ur comments and tips. Thanks

And yeah I have a long way to improve composition.

 

[cabbySHE]

wrong guess I suppose by the word " ladies ".
posted in wrong section...perhaps portrait n poses have more viewers.