Please pardon the image quality .
This image is shot on my mobile phone ad-hoc while I was enjoying a small snack of oranges ($0.20 per 100g at Giant).
Please be gentle as I am a newbie! Thanks in advance to all sifu, sempais, and fellow clubsnappers for your cons
1. in what area is critique to be sought?tructive critique
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and layout, tones. Please do not critique on image quality (noise), or sharpness as it is not so controllable (at my skill level) on a mobile phone camera.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Conceptual work of peeling a mandarin orange (which is usually functional and insignificant compared to the joy of enjoying the fruit itself)
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
4pm natural light on PnS (mobile phone camera) , with some fill off LED flash.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I hope that my short, adhoc work is as visually appealing the viewer, as it was delicious to my mouth.
Thanks again for C&C
humbly
Shizuma
This image is shot on my mobile phone ad-hoc while I was enjoying a small snack of oranges ($0.20 per 100g at Giant).
Please be gentle as I am a newbie! Thanks in advance to all sifu, sempais, and fellow clubsnappers for your cons
1. in what area is critique to be sought?tructive critique
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and layout, tones. Please do not critique on image quality (noise), or sharpness as it is not so controllable (at my skill level) on a mobile phone camera.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Conceptual work of peeling a mandarin orange (which is usually functional and insignificant compared to the joy of enjoying the fruit itself)
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
4pm natural light on PnS (mobile phone camera) , with some fill off LED flash.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I hope that my short, adhoc work is as visually appealing the viewer, as it was delicious to my mouth.
Thanks again for C&C
humbly
Shizuma