Does this photo have nice composition?

[Viifallen]

 

[ziploc]

No. The red x should be put on the thirds. ;p

Btw, please share pictures in the gallery section, thanks.

 

[Viifallen]

hmmm i cant upload to gallery and i gt no idea why

 

[benchan21]

I think that you are trying to link to your image on flickr. Maybe you can read this thread on how to get it working properly:
http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=462896

 

[Viifallen]

ohh myyy thank you so much!!!

 

[night86mare]

I think that you are trying to link to your image on flickr. Maybe you can read this thread on how to get it working properly:
http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=462896

perhaps it is better to post this in the critque corner, or gallery sections.

in any case, some quick comments (or rather, questions - don't worry, they're not frivolous) on the composition:

(1) what do you think of the cropped off trishaw?
(2) what do you think is portrayed here?
(3) do you think the lack of the person's face/expression here adds or subtracts?
(4) what is the first thing that captures your attention when you look at the photo (honestly)?

 

[hotwork77]

Not sure leh. It looks like cut off here and cut off there. Besides a photo only showing the back side or sides doesn't look pleasing.

 

[Viifallen]

hmmm how can i improve this shot?:cry:

 

[Viifallen]

fun photo

 

[pinholecam]

For my lowly standards, the shot is ok.
Maybe a bit lower and nearer to be more engaging.

 

[Fireemblem]

It is a snapshot. Dunnno what you want to protray

 

[Octarine]

[wrong link to image]
fun photo

Did you read the recommended article? Do you understand that this is neither Critics Corner nor Gallery Section?

 

[Octarine]

hmmm how can i improve this shot?:cry:

Think more before you press the shutter. Reshoot.