Hi all,
This is my first time posting in this sub-forum.
I hope you guys can feedback so i can learn from it. =)
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
all aspects (Composition, exposure, pp,etc)
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To show that its okay to be different from the rest,
and let your hair down and just have some fun.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Around late morning, after a photoshoot at clarke quay.
It was during the break that i spotted two girls playing around in the water.
Yes, they knew that i was capturing these pictures after a while, they smiled in return and even posed for me, but i didnt focus those shots in time tho.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think this is a rare moment, subject was perfect and im happy to capture the moment.
but perhaps there are some things i can improve on.like framing of shot,exposure,pp,etc.
(i typed etc, not because im lazy to mention the aspects, but because there might be various aspects that im not aware of.)
Thanks in advance. =)
This is my first time posting in this sub-forum.
I hope you guys can feedback so i can learn from it. =)
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
all aspects (Composition, exposure, pp,etc)
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To show that its okay to be different from the rest,
and let your hair down and just have some fun.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Around late morning, after a photoshoot at clarke quay.
It was during the break that i spotted two girls playing around in the water.
Yes, they knew that i was capturing these pictures after a while, they smiled in return and even posed for me, but i didnt focus those shots in time tho.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think this is a rare moment, subject was perfect and im happy to capture the moment.
but perhaps there are some things i can improve on.like framing of shot,exposure,pp,etc.
(i typed etc, not because im lazy to mention the aspects, but because there might be various aspects that im not aware of.)
Thanks in advance. =)