Saw a magnificent sight of clouds and sunset out of my HDB window and immediately grabbed my cam to take a few pics...
Somehow or another, such impromptu sessions always lead to a lot of pictures taken and only a few selected... (newbies' flaw) anyway to improve so as to get 1 shot one kill, get the perfect picture with the minimum shots taken? perhaps with experience gained through critics...
First pic taken with UWA at 11mm to capture the vast cloud formation and with sun as the light source bringing light to the sky and the HDBs at the bottom.
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Exposure and Composition of such sunset scenes.
Should the sun have overexposed highlights? e.g. in the first pics with rays coming out, but if underexposed the buildings at the bottom will be too dark and sun rays' effect will not be there.
Should the HDBs be included in the first place?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To capture the magnificent clouds formation with the sunset as a backdrop giving the picture more colors.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Sunset out of HDB window. Awed by the magnificent cloud formation and colors.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
First picture is taken with UWA lens in order to capture the vast cloud formation. (flare at corner due to sun's rays) Sun portion has slightly overexposed highlights. Perhaps should have though of my GND filter but was too awed by the sight to think..... haiz...
pic cropped, resized and some minor PP to enhance the colors.
Appreciate all critics and comments in order to improve. Thanks in advance.
Somehow or another, such impromptu sessions always lead to a lot of pictures taken and only a few selected... (newbies' flaw) anyway to improve so as to get 1 shot one kill, get the perfect picture with the minimum shots taken? perhaps with experience gained through critics...
First pic taken with UWA at 11mm to capture the vast cloud formation and with sun as the light source bringing light to the sky and the HDBs at the bottom.
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Exposure and Composition of such sunset scenes.
Should the sun have overexposed highlights? e.g. in the first pics with rays coming out, but if underexposed the buildings at the bottom will be too dark and sun rays' effect will not be there.
Should the HDBs be included in the first place?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To capture the magnificent clouds formation with the sunset as a backdrop giving the picture more colors.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Sunset out of HDB window. Awed by the magnificent cloud formation and colors.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
First picture is taken with UWA lens in order to capture the vast cloud formation. (flare at corner due to sun's rays) Sun portion has slightly overexposed highlights. Perhaps should have though of my GND filter but was too awed by the sight to think..... haiz...
pic cropped, resized and some minor PP to enhance the colors.
Appreciate all critics and comments in order to improve. Thanks in advance.
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