The Helix

[gareth]

The Helix.

1. in what area is critique to be sought?

The whole picture

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

The beauty of Helix

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

Weekdays with less crowd in the night at around 8pm

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

Thinks the Lighting is attractive.


Welcome all CnC from fellow clubsnap members!

 

[gareth]

Taken in Raw with long exposure Using Pentax K-X.. hope everyone can CnC !! =/

 

[Kit]

Watch out for the lights. They are all clipped. Your buildings are also falling backwards.

 

[gravism]

I feel that it's too overexposed and not sharp enough. What settings did you use?

 

[ahliang]

I think the on-going construction spoils your composition and it a bit too bright.

 

[gareth]

Watch out for the lights. They are all clipped. Your buildings are also falling backwards.

Thanks! maybe is the positioning problem? how do i correct it?

I feel that it's too overexposed and not sharp enough. What settings did you use?

THanks! I use iso 200 A F9 and 15 sec exposure on manual setting.

I think the on-going construction spoils your composition and it a bit too bright.

THanks! true. kind of mist and bright over thr. =/