Okie...my first time posting...im a noob ...yea
heres the photo
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
composition, posititon, anything that can be improve on...does this successful display what i hope to portray...
i notice a piece of leaf which i should have taken away... oh well..but i only saw it when doing pp.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
i hope to get the feeling of being left behind, being abandoned, the feel of no one cares.
in a certain sense a feeling of desperation, of wanting someone to something to take a look at you and do something about you.
i turned the picture B&W to represent desolation.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
physical: at my void deck iso 200, f5, 1/3s, with 18-55mm @ 22mm.
i didnt touch anything...i just took what i saw...
emotional: i guess...i felt something like this in this season of my life. i left the tree there...cos i am reminded somehow that there is still shelter even in times of desperation.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i think this picture could be a bit plain...i dunno... C&C welcome.
please let me know...so i can improve better
thanks
heres the photo
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
composition, posititon, anything that can be improve on...does this successful display what i hope to portray...
i notice a piece of leaf which i should have taken away... oh well..but i only saw it when doing pp.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
i hope to get the feeling of being left behind, being abandoned, the feel of no one cares.
in a certain sense a feeling of desperation, of wanting someone to something to take a look at you and do something about you.
i turned the picture B&W to represent desolation.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
physical: at my void deck iso 200, f5, 1/3s, with 18-55mm @ 22mm.
i didnt touch anything...i just took what i saw...
emotional: i guess...i felt something like this in this season of my life. i left the tree there...cos i am reminded somehow that there is still shelter even in times of desperation.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i think this picture could be a bit plain...i dunno... C&C welcome.
please let me know...so i can improve better
thanks
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