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cheguthamrin

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Coffee Bean outlet outside Wheelock Place.

Why - Both men having animated conversation under the shade while its glaring hot out there, creating a silhouette against the white panel. Beyond the panel is the new building still under construction, with those orange metal frames.

What - Is the composition okay / or could it have been better? No / minimum pp was done.

First photo up for this segmen. :sweat:
 

Hi, these are my views.

1) My eyes were drawn to the Red structure immediately when i look at the shot. Apparently your focusing and metering was on the outdoor view instead. Too distracting.

2) The main subjects, the men, are also not so appealing. And kinda not interesting to "see" people having conversation.

But bro, i notice you have been posting to improve your shots. Do keep it up! Ganbatte~ :)
 

Hi, these are my views.

1) My eyes were drawn to the Red structure immediately when i look at the shot. Apparently your focusing and metering was on the outdoor view instead. Too distracting.

2) The main subjects, the men, are also not so appealing. And kinda not interesting to "see" people having conversation.

But bro, i notice you have been posting to improve your shots. Do keep it up! Ganbatte~ :)

Thanks brader...
How else to learn, but from other's inputs? At least I'll get to step somewhere from here. ;)
 

What does the structure have to do with the men's conversation? If at all, it serves to compete for attention with the two men.
 

What does the structure have to do with the men's conversation? If at all, it serves to compete for attention with the two men.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm... didnt think abt that earlier.
Maybe something like these guys talking abt the structure?

Oh well... thanks for the input. Really gotto work on the brains next time. :dunno:
Thanks for your input!
 

My first impression was that the two people are either contractors or the architects of the construction going on behind.
 

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