Dear TS,
Don't get me wrong ... I think technically, you are pretty good with the photo-shoot -- good exposure and control, and even the Outdoor fill-in were quite balance.
( Just that some of the poses are quite cheezy and predictable ).
The point i am bringing across is that we who are in the Bridal Fashion, Graphics and Photo Art Industry must lead, or at least get inline to the present contemporary fashion trend.
If not, we will never grow or move forward, and sooner or later you'll get stagnant and outdated.
If you put-up 'such' portfolio of works, be prepared to attract 'such' customers to your doors. And from one such customer, will lead to another ... you will never be able to have a break-thru, or a style that you could call your own -- and make a difference in the Bridal Circle.
If money is the motive for such works, then sure you could do it -- but don't put-it up online for promotion or putting your Name/Signature on it -- becos it will engraved on the peers' minds of what kind of Photographer/Artist you are, and a comparison or reference will be made in the future.
Nevermind, it will never be too late to re-start your strategy of re-making oneself, where you want the world to remember you -- of what you want to be remembered or to be recognized.
Good luck ! :thumbsup: