HuiRong @ Sentosa 130507

[Kensuke]

Today my first time outdoor shooting ( finally ...) . Meet Producer , shawn and the rest of the ppl ... and not to forget Leejay ( u are the man ! )

Fast hand fast leg ....

and Upz for u , Producer !

 

[leejay]

Heheh, nice to meet you too!

Good angle, but I bet you have more good shots today!

 

[jOhO]

Heheh, nice to meet you too!

Good angle, but I bet you have more good shots today!

i agree.. i really hope this isn't the best shot for the day...

 

[horizon_grazer]

Some comments, hopefully no offense :sweat:


1) Too many objects fighting for attention in the picture.
I'm still ok w/ the white frames in the foreground
but your BG also cluttered w/ benches


Model

1) Hair going in all directions, especially very visible against the white hairband

2) Raised left elbow, casting shadows on the model face

3) Model 's costume had too many straps (6), very distracting

4) Necklace design & colour out of place w/ outfit, IMHO, shld lose it


Again, hopefully no offense & congrats on your first outdoor shooting

 

[night86mare]

Her eye makeup looks funny..?

:dunno:

 

[leejay]

Her eye makeup looks funny..?

:dunno:

It doesn't matter. It depends on how you take them.

 

[razor]

...she looks as though she is about to snap her neck...

 

[watchdog]

I dont like the bars in the foreground and the benches in the background. The rest of the picture is quite nice.

 

[Producer]

Hi bro, nice to meet you at the shoot and thanks for being the first one to share.

Look forward to your sharing of the other 2 models. Cheers!:thumbsup:

 

[jdredd]

the makeup is awful.

 

[cckue]

Agree with watchdog, I don't like the bars too.
More pictures please.

 

[Kensuke]

Two more ...

 

[TMC]

that is some hideous makeup.

 

[Kensuke]

that is some hideous makeup.

Or perhaps is jus my skill of my PP mah ... :cry:
Still learning in progress ... :sweat:

 

[leejay]

Two more ...

I know your lens would do wonders. Nice shots. :thumbsup:

 

[nemesis32]

Just some observations and comments.
Makeup - can be improved.
Location - good
Model - nice
Expression/pose - can be improved
Timing - i believe these shots are shot around noon or at least strong sun? It clearly affects the model. best is to do a shoot from 8-10am and 4-6pm