I have a little problem with a little X-shaped rainbow colored "structure" (reflection from the lens?) in the top left corner. It can be easily removed in Photoshop though.
That's the problem... nowadays people just used photoshop. Instead of improving their skills on the camera at the scene they slog their precious time on PC editing skills and end up becoming a graphic designer instead.
Try printing a edited image and chances are it will be caught when scrutinised under a common 8x scope- not to mention the industrial standard in 10-12x.
Back to C&C...
Your title suggest worshipping the sun which suggested your intent. So where is the worship? You need another subject to project this. As a photographer, chances are you are not part of the story so if you are the one who's worshipping the sun, you need to be in the frame, if not where's the point?
Just as you would like to keep the tailing rays by allowing more space at the bottom, you've created an unnecessary distraction of voidness.
Not including the main subject (ie. the Sun) is okay but the direction of the rays seem weak an impression as you cropped with rays angled too steep to nowhere.
As the clouds lacked volume and intensity, perhaps it is not a good idea to include the whole cloud as it only present a weak smoke up in the air.
As for the X, it's just a common lens flare created by stray lights bouncing around the barrel of the lens. Try a polarising filter or zoom in a little.
As a whole, this picture lacks drama and composition.
Sorry pal, this won't work for me.