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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    - Composition

    - Abstract creativity

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    - First time trying still objects and with lightings

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    - dDarkness, with two color torchlights

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    - I quite like the picture, with dirty-yellow lighting creating a shadow of the glass

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    Nice lightings.
    But 1 thing to note. Maybe a close-up would be better. From 1st view, the bottle seems like the main subject.

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    Perhaps showing more of the joker face would be better. Some people have difficulty reading "Joker" vertically

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    Quote Originally Posted by shaoken View Post
    Nice lightings.
    But 1 thing to note. Maybe a close-up would be better. From 1st view, the bottle seems like the main subject.
    because i was thinking of including the shadow (which IMO it might intrigue more feeling in it). haha. thanks. next time i will try to focus on my main topic

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sgdevilzz View Post
    Perhaps showing more of the joker face would be better. Some people have difficulty reading "Joker" vertically
    haha. yea.. actually the shadow partially covering the word joker seems to be a bit of a hindrance or distracting...

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    The composition isn't bad, but too much green and yellow for me. And in terms of creativity.. you can do better!

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