Noob Attempt...

Shodan99 · 5th November 2004

Hi all,

This is my noob attempt at photography, feedback would be appreciated

Babarian King

Brewery

Bridge

Freedom

Thanks

mervlam · 5th November 2004

hey... u mind scaling down your photos? too big for viewing

Shodan99 · 5th November 2004

Err.. cannot edit the post

Maybe one of the mods can help?

Thanks for looking

Steviemac · 5th November 2004

Nice pics Shodan ,I like the mesh fence entitled freedom the best , Im quite good at this one myself even thought it was by accident , nice sharp foreground and good use of depth of field , the contrast is good is this genuine black and white or a trick of the light ? nice effect anyways

Shodan99 · 5th November 2004

The last picture was taken using normal afternoon light. Post processing done was just auto contrast and b+w in photoshop.

More critique would be welcome

Thanks for looking...

Prismatic · 5th November 2004

Nice effort there. ^^
Maybe you can try shooting a theme, because the pictures sort of lack a distinctive focus. As in no clear subject to draw attention on.

Shodan99 · 5th November 2004

Prismatic: I just got my camera over a week ago and was still trying out and exprimenting to find my own composition style, that perhaps could contribute to the lack of focus/theme...

Besides, I think I still have a lot to learn about lighting conditions and shooting technique. Anyway, your points are noted and are very helpful

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Shodan99 Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 382	Noob Attempt... Hi all, This is my noob attempt at photography, feedback would be appreciated Babarian King Brewery Bridge Freedom Thanks

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Shodan99 Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 382	The last picture was taken using normal afternoon light. Post processing done was just auto contrast and b+w in photoshop. More critique would be welcome Thanks for looking... Last edited by Shodan99; 5th November 2004 at 04:55 PM.

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mervlam Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 2,422	hey... u mind scaling down your photos? too big for viewing

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Shodan99 Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 382	Err.. cannot edit the post Maybe one of the mods can help? Thanks for looking

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Steviemac Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 67	Nice pics Shodan ,I like the mesh fence entitled freedom the best , Im quite good at this one myself even thought it was by accident , nice sharp foreground and good use of depth of field , the contrast is good is this genuine black and white or a trick of the light ? nice effect anyways

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Prismatic Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: In the void. Posts: 1,215	Nice effort there. ^^ Maybe you can try shooting a theme, because the pictures sort of lack a distinctive focus. As in no clear subject to draw attention on.