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    Default Yummy !!!

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, Post Processing

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Was trying to show the caged duck

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    was passing by a fair where people were waiting for a piece of the meat

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Yummy !!!


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    Default Re: Yummy !!!

    I'm sorry, but the first impression I get isn't "yummy" at all. In fact, quite the opposite... From this angle, it looks like I'm looking at a bird carcass.
    I think the processing doesn't do the duck justice. The mood of the picture feels funeral-like because of the high black levels.
    I hope you won't be offended by my comments. Keep shooting!

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    Default Re: Yummy !!!

    it looks like cruelty to animal instead of yummy..

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    Default Re: Yummy !!!

    i found the hanging ducks cruel to look at. and at first i thought they were dogs.

    but then again... another man's meat is another man's poison

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    Default Re: Yummy !!!

    the composition is off with too many distracting elements in the background.
    duck is always yummy, provided at 1st glance it can be seem it's ducks hanging there and not something else.
    try shooting at a frontal angle where you can get more ducks in the frame

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    hmmm sorry i think the colours and composition dont really work for me.. roasted ducks should look golden brown and oily.. hmm maybe you should emphasize that.

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