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Witness · 24th October 2004

does this work?

cheers!

romeo · 24th October 2004

I think it should be

heehee.. your pic wasn't showing

Witness · 24th October 2004

hmmm...spoilt link hmm...

so how??

foxtwo · 24th October 2004

deeper dof. but something is lacking, can't figure out what.

Witness · 24th October 2004

i tink its the angle...need a stronger lead in line perhaps??

foxtwo · 24th October 2004

maybe a stronger contrast or more edgy feel.

Witness · 24th October 2004

hmmm how to achieve edgy feel?

lazylagoon · 24th October 2004

the texture of the ground looks interesting... however, i feel that the interesting details are left out due to the lack of depth of field.. or perhaps you could have focused nearer than further... the blur foreground makes me feel uncomfortable cos on one hand i am eager and trying to see to the details but yet i cant see cos its not focused.. the blurred part takes up a bit too much space...

Witness · 28th October 2004

okie...noted,,

Hosea · 28th October 2004

Front OOF could be the problem for this shot.

DaNi3L · 28th October 2004

Originally Posted by Hosea

Front OOF could be the problem for this shot.

Perhaps front OOF accompanied by the lack of a subject or focus point.

Witness · 28th October 2004

eh,,, u mean the shallow depth of field in the front ya??? ---> front OOF....hardly hear of this term being used here haha...

thanks for the comments....will go work in it

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romeo Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Lost Posts: 270	I think it should be heehee.. your pic wasn't showing

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foxtwo Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: singapore Posts: 1,707	deeper dof. but something is lacking, can't figure out what.

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lazylagoon Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 168	the texture of the ground looks interesting... however, i feel that the interesting details are left out due to the lack of depth of field.. or perhaps you could have focused nearer than further... the blur foreground makes me feel uncomfortable cos on one hand i am eager and trying to see to the details but yet i cant see cos its not focused.. the blurred part takes up a bit too much space...

28th October 2004	#10
Hosea Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 4,673	Front OOF could be the problem for this shot.