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    Default Life is abt ON and OFF



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition and paranoma processing

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    show the full moon together with esplanade
    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Took at full moon night
    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    i love my photo

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    Default Re: Life is abt ON and OFF

    I love photos which have a bit of something going on in every little corner of the frame. Little details easily missed when they're not the main subject. So for this image, you need to tone down the foreground brightness as it's too distracting. I really like the illusion of the moonlight lighting up the rooftops whether it was unintended or not. Bottom framing is too tight for me though, much more of the courtyard would be preferred continued with a subtle play of light. That would bring the attention back to the moon & the rooftops. try vertical panoramic stitching instead as horizontal is not giving enough height.

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    so nice pic ...good job yehein

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    OMG !! i just realize i put the wrong title lol ... the title is for another photo pls excuse me

    @foxtwo thanks for comment .. noted and will try out vertical panorama

    @xendrome thanks

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    Default Re: Life is abt ON and OFF

    Quote Originally Posted by YeHein View Post
    OMG !! i just realize i put the wrong title lol ... the title is for another photo pls excuse me

    @foxtwo thanks for comment .. noted and will try out vertical panorama

    @xendrome thanks
    No wonder... I was sitting here thinking for 2 minutes what you mean with your title... *confused*

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    Default Re: Life is abt ON and OFF

    First time I thought was the eyes of a fly, the title should be, Fly's eyes

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    haha I agree with you .. Thanks for the title
    Quote Originally Posted by zane80 View Post
    First time I thought was the eyes of a fly, the title should be, Fly's eyes

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