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    Default A Baby Concentrate



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    Composition.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    The concentrate and the expression of the eye of the baby.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    Its indoor in the evening taken without flash.

    4) what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    Just like the look of the eyes of the baby.

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    Default Re: A Baby Concentrate

    If your entire picture is about the baby's expression and concentration, it has failed, as your point of focus is on the DVD player and the platform. The baby is completely out of focus.

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    irrelevant.

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    Copy that will improve on my basic first before I post next time thanks for the information

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    Default Re: A Baby Concentrate

    when i saw the title... i thought it was some drink made of babies...

    u know... orange concentrate ... might wanna title your stuff in a less odd manner too...

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    If the baby is looking at the DVD player, the oof baby would actually make this photo pretty awesome..

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    Quote Originally Posted by allenleonhart
    when i saw the title... i thought it was some drink made of babies...

    u know... orange concentrate ... might wanna title your stuff in a less odd manner too...
    Ok thanks for the information

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    Quote Originally Posted by scapetist
    If the baby is looking at the DVD player, the oof baby would actually make this photo pretty awesome..
    Thanks for the advice I will try to improve my basic first

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    Default Re: A Baby Concentrate

    ya, agree with daredevil123, if your photo is about "The concentrate and the expression of the eye of the baby."
    Then I personally think the baby's eye or expression must at least be the point which is being focus?
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    Default Re: A Baby Concentrate

    Out of focus, the first thing I notice is the table..
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