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Thread: Life In Chinatown IV

  1. #1

    Smile Life In Chinatown IV

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Lighting, Composition, and the feeling that live in old chinatown.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Definitely i go to B&W pictures, i saw uncle with tattoo in his left hand, staring his friends who play chess. The place that i shot this one is at kreta ayer square, chinatown.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Very crowded at that time, maybe because it's a last day of lantern festival.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I can't show more on the tattoo, because he's wearing the safari t-shirt.

  2. #2

    Default Re: Life In Chinatown IV

    Took me awhile to figure out it was tattoo as i deliberately not read your description first. The design of the shirt and the tattoo blended too well, not something i quite like.
    I'm a PCW in newbie section. Hi. Welcome! :)

  3. #3
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004

    Default Re: Life In Chinatown IV

    Leaving this in colour would be much better. I noticed every time my eyes focused on his pants leg, as it's the brightest part of the image.

    You can do a low saturation process for the coloured version, but please do not do one of those 2/3 B&W 1/3 Colour gimmicky versions.
    Then burn in the pants leg just a touch.

    Love his shirt btw.

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Aug 2010
    Woodlands, Singapore, Singapor

    Default Re: Life In Chinatown IV

    the photo is nice except i think u should hv took out the pants from thigh and below, showing some of it can le....please i dun mean take out his pants! u know what i mean la. cos the pants below dun say anything to ur pic. just me bah..


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