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    Default A portraits!!!

    http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/...s/DSC_1725.jpg

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Exposure , Composition, Lighting n Editing.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    a good portrait photo.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Home studio with 1 speed light from the left.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    pretty n sweet with a little sexy.

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    Default Re: A portraits!!!

    errr i think a bit too blue for me.... wb seems off

    and sorry la. i never manage to learn how to appreciate xmm shots...

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    Default Re: A portraits!!!

    Her left hand got cut off. I would say the lighting is pretty decent.

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    Default Re: A portraits!!!

    I think this is a very nice portrait shot! Although could be slightly improved by using a wider crop..

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    As a general rule, I think it'll look bad if you frame a portrait with limbs below the elbow or knee chopped off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tsumetiv View Post
    I think this is a very nice portrait shot! Although could be slightly improved by using a wider crop..
    Were you like only looking at the bottom third center part of the photo?

    Quote Originally Posted by allenleonhart View Post
    errr i think a bit too blue for me.... wb seems off

    and sorry la. i never manage to learn how to appreciate xmm shots...
    XMM meh? not LMM?

    Overall, a bit under. Framing a little too tight. As mentioned, should not cut at the limbs. It makes her look amputated.
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    Default Re: A portraits!!!

    Thanks guys for the feedback. will take note on those points.

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    Default Re: A portraits!!!

    1. Lighting & exposure - ok, composition - can improve, too tight n her shirt edge is folded. Try not to cut or corp the picture at the joint, editing - try to soften the picture and she will look flawless.
    2. All you need is practice.
    3. Emotion.
    4. Normal.

    These are my personal feel by looking at the picture.

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    I felt it was slightly underexposed.
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