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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition and colors

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Islands atmosphere, warm colors

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Around noon, walking down the main street in the city (Limassol)

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Like the colors but i thing the composition is not the best here (my first post here, DSLR newbie)

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    Welcome to Clubsnap

    Seems the camera was little tilted to the right, vertical alignment is always a pain.
    Cropping the cars by half is not good.. try to get the whole car or leave it off entirely and focus on the man walking


    Excellent colours though..

    Just my 2 cents worth... Keep shooting and sharing...
    Voigtlander

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    Amazing tone ! is this shoot during in the evening or morning ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gangru View Post
    Welcome to Clubsnap

    Seems the camera was little tilted to the right, vertical alignment is always a pain.
    Cropping the cars by half is not good.. try to get the whole car or leave it off entirely and focus on the man walking


    Excellent colours though..

    Just my 2 cents worth... Keep shooting and sharing...
    Thanks for your comment!
    I didn't want to crop the picture that hard, so i left these cars... But thanks for the advice, I will try to keep that in mind when shooting next time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by biskandar View Post
    Amazing tone ! is this shoot during in the evening or morning ?
    Thanks! I don't remember the exact hour, but it was somewhere in the morning.

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    Default Re: Street on the island

    I thinks you pp the color to much. This was shot close to noon base on the shadow cast, you also mentioned on the third line.The sky is a bit artificial but if you like its ok. For me it's a little too warm the rest is mention by earlier critique.Thanks for allowing me to view and comment. Hope to see more from you.
    Last edited by pansclub; 21st July 2011 at 11:06 PM.
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    Thanks for your comments. I straightened a photo and lowered a saturation a bit. Also cropped a bit on the left and bottom:



    Hope it helped a little.
    Last edited by hateom; 21st July 2011 at 11:57 PM.

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