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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    I took this candid shot of her trying to aim at her own subject. It is natural that she is not aware other is also aiming a shot at her. She is in a world of her own.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    To sneak in a candid shot without the other party knowing and yet capture the best and sweetest moment.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken?
    While I try to steal a shot, I want to make sure I also capture it in the right timing. I am afraid she will look at my way and then it will spoil everything. It has to be quick and at the right moment.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I crop the picture to focus on what I wish to portray. It is about this lady, her camera and the subject she is aiming at. The world stand still for her.

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    overall looks ok.
    Personally, I would preferred to have the sharpest point the eyes and face of the subject instead on the camera she is holding.
    My suggestion is either go even tighter or closer in your framing or go wider to show what she is so intensely focusing on.
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