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    Red face Insistent



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Insistent feeling , lighting , and composition .

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Am more to black and white photo , put some of disturbing area inside the frame , and focusing in the insistent object itself .

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    I went to the bugis street, it was heave rain in that time,
    I found an old man walking with his difficulty to walk, i think his angkle on the right foot has some injured.
    Interesting, he still want to across the street even the lighting traffic became a red, may be he doesn't want to be wet in whole body .

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Quite disturbing and hope that the insistent feeling reflect on that old man.

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    Is the subject in focus? It would look better if he is in focus and if you can see some rain too.

    Perhaps the angle can be slightly to the side of the man, it would give a bit more perspective.

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    Default Re: Insistent

    Thanks rafsnaps , yeah true , i need to give more contrast specially in the head of the subject .

  4. #4

    Default Re: Insistent

    Love the composition.
    Tones need some work. And bad luck on the subject blur..


    Keep smiling.. Shooting and sharing
    Voigtlander

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