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    Default Desaturated Tree

    1. In what area is critique to be sought?

    Overall composition, colour and lighting.

    2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    I am new to DSLR. By taking more photos and asking for critique, I hope to learn as much as I can from all the gurus in this forum.

    3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    Taken w D7000 and 17-50 tamron lens.

    4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    Not sure if the exposure is correct for this type of composure. Maybe too much ground in the right foreground.


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    Not a bad first try for a newbie. It shows you put some thought into the composition by placing the POI (point of interest) off center. The presence of the 2 smaller trees to the left and right of the large tree sort of takes away from the picture somewhat. Of course you cannot control where the trees are situated, but you can look for a better angle or another POI. Good try though. I like the BW conversion, is it done in-camera? or in PP? Well done for a first try.

    Here are some articles on composition, hope you find them helpful:

    http://photoinf.com/General/Gary_Sta...mposition.html

    http://photoinf.com/General/Robert_B...ual_Design.htm

    http://photoinf.com/General/Lee_Fros..._Landscape.htm

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