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    Post First Couple Shoot




    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    I would like comments about composition,whitebalance, foreground, background and Focus.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    I would like to achieve to improve my couple shoots next time.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    This is not the where I plan to shoot. We are sitting for short break. And I feel that something make me to shoot then I shoot it.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I think this is the best photo that day with that lovely couple.

    Thank you for your viewing and comments.

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    Default Re: First Couple Shoot

    too much head room

    the guy's right hand being crop off, the highlight on the forearm is very distracting, have a illusion of bamboo stick arm.

    full frontal shot of a female is never flattening, unless she has a great figure.

    the left hand of the female is like don't know what to do with it.

    the vignetting is distracting, also make the arms of both look funny, should have a tight crop to remove the unwanted elements in the photo.
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    Default Re: First Couple Shoot

    Thanks A lot for giving me suggestion. Next time I will try to avoid all the things u said

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