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    Default UOB Buildings

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    Seeking comments and critiques for composition. all other C&Cs welcome

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    To hopefully improve on various perspective architecture shots

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    9pm, light drizzle. iso 100 @ f/18 20secs

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    personally like the contrast of the buildings against the sky


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    Default Re: UOB Buildings

    Identify which are the 'attractive' elements in your image. In this case, I like the reflection of the 2nd tower and the serial replication of the 1st tower facing wall. I don't see the need to put in the 2nd tower as it adds nothing constructive, just a distraction jutting into the frame.

    As it usually is the style of composition, either have many buildings in frame or isolate your main subject. Consider slapping on a ND filter for cloud movement, make the night sky more interesting if your including it.

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    thank u. i will bear ur comments and advice in mind

    Quote Originally Posted by foxtwo View Post
    Identify which are the 'attractive' elements in your image. In this case, I like the reflection of the 2nd tower and the serial replication of the 1st tower facing wall. I don't see the need to put in the 2nd tower as it adds nothing constructive, just a distraction jutting into the frame.

    As it usually is the style of composition, either have many buildings in frame or isolate your main subject. Consider slapping on a ND filter for cloud movement, make the night sky more interesting if your including it.

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    Default Re: UOB Buildings

    A couple of technical issues:

    1. dust spots - at least clone/heal them out.
    2. highlights blow on building on the right - This can be avoided either by black card, or PP.
    3. Picture seems a tad soft. Is your tripod very steady? Also know that cars passing by hard ground can cause vibrations as well.

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    Default Re: UOB Buildings

    Sorry but I don't know is it my eyes.
    I see some blurness or OOF in the pic.

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    its actually the result of noise reduction in LR / PS that is causing the blurness or OOF that seems apparent here...

    perhaps can have a bit more sharpening and less NR.....

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