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Old 15th July 2004   #1
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Hi all,

The pics were out of focus and i was hoping to turn them into some abstract pics. I added the grains to both the pics and did some burning and stuff. Haha, my PS is skill quite limited but, does this work for anyone?


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Which is better?
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Old 15th July 2004   #2
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prefer #2...

how about making the rest of the hands a little bit more blurry ?
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Old 15th July 2004   #3
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Originally Posted by AlOn_
prefer #2...

how about making the rest of the hands a little bit more blurry ?

Hi Alon,

thanks for the comments.

I dun wanna blur the rest of the hands becos i want pple to see a 'trail' of hands instead of just the hands in front.
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Old 17th July 2004   #4
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come on guys..im still waiting for opinion..
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The slight blur in the pic actually suits the mood of the pic. I thought it worked quite well even without the burning. If anything I thought the pic could use a little more contrast. Makes it a little more dramatic.

Nice shot.

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Old 17th July 2004   #6
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thanks for ya advice kman.. i appreciate it..

I increased the contrast and here's the pic...


Better?


Btw, u got the same nick as my brother! haha..he's not in cs though
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That's kewl but I would burn the hand a little as it looks too hot now...I would also tweak the hue a little as it looks a little green...

I would crop the photo a tad more to bring the focus to the hands...

Hope you don't mind but here's what I've done with it...see what you think.

Nice shot btw.




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thanks for ya advice kman.. i appreciate it..

I increased the contrast and here's the pic...


Better?


Btw, u got the same nick as my brother! haha..he's not in cs though

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Old 18th July 2004   #8
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Hey Kman, thanks for taking the trouble to improve my pic.

For cropping of pic, i think i would still prefer my original 'uncut' version.To me,it looks more natural having to see the entire length of the hand on the first pair and seeing less and less of the hands on the subsequent pairs, somehow it forms a converging pattern.

i love the way u burned the hand and tweaked the hue. It appears to have a sligh blueish cast now but it looks cool to me. haha.

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Old 19th July 2004   #9
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Kman,

How did u adjust the hue so that its not greenish? I press Ctrl+U to adjust the hue but it makes no difference becos its already in BW.

how did u do it?
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Old 19th July 2004   #10
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hey I think you've gotta know what you're trying to say with your picture
You can increase the contrast or change the sharpness or blahblahblah but then does doing all that make your photo say what you want it to say?
Everyone's gonna have their own opinion about what works
your first two photos say totally different things but neither is "better" until you decide what you're trying to say, then perhaps it's "better at illustrating what I'm trying to say"
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I agree with Matlock.
Matlock, what are you trying to say?
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Old 20th July 2004   #12
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Originally Posted by mattlock
hey I think you've gotta know what you're trying to say with your picture
You can increase the contrast or change the sharpness or blahblahblah but then does doing all that make your photo say what you want it to say?
Everyone's gonna have their own opinion about what works
your first two photos say totally different things but neither is "better" until you decide what you're trying to say, then perhaps it's "better at illustrating what I'm trying to say"


You had just set my mind thinking..
U r right, i didnt know what i wanted to portray.

Thanks for the advice.
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I basically used the colour balance option and added a little blue to it. That's it.

Kman

Originally Posted by ordinaryless
Kman,

How did u adjust the hue so that its not greenish? I press Ctrl+U to adjust the hue but it makes no difference becos its already in BW.

how did u do it?
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Originally Posted by kman
I basically used the colour balance option and added a little blue to it. That's it.

Kman
Haha...ok, thanks!
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Old 20th July 2004   #15
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Hey how can I miss this, is a very good pix... where did you actually take this pix?
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Originally Posted by Woodman
Hey how can I miss this, is a very good pix... where did you actually take this pix?
This is a shot taken at one of the Orientation Camps in my campus. They were doing a mass dance.

Thanks for ya kind words Mama!
You can view the rest at my gallery!
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Honestly speaking, iI personally felt that is a great opportunity and hard to come by kind of shots, the value was already there not to mentioned it was well taken.

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Originally Posted by Woodman
Honestly speaking, iI personally felt that is a great opportunity and hard to come by kind of shots, the value was already there not to mentioned it was well taken.
wah...

You're too kind..

Many Many thanks..personally i like this better



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I am impressed. Cheers for you.
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Originally Posted by Woodman
I am impressed. Cheers for you.
thanks
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