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    1. In which area is critique or feedback to be given?
    Composition,B and W toning.

    2. What were you hoping to achieve with this image?
    The feel of an endless roadway.

    3. Under what circumstance was the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    I was travelling back from genting down and was looking for an angle which gives us the feel of a endless roadway.

    4. Thread-starter's personal thoughts about the image.
    I have no idea,i need more input about the feel,i believe good photos are usually emotional invoking.I wouldnt consider mine's a great shot but i hope to receive more inputs to improve on my shot..

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    Default Re: the endless roadway

    Picture too...small
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    Default Re: the endless roadway

    looks like a interesting bnw photo.
    However, this winding road doesn't look endless.
    have a agree with kwttan. Photo so small how to cnc properly.
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    Looks like something out of Silent Hill movie.
    Nice shot. Hope to see a larger version of it with more details.

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    it's too small...

    but when you've got a road disappearing around the corner, it feels like it might end somewhere..

    if the shot was of a straight road disappearing down the horizon..then possibly then it'll feel like an "endless road"

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    i feel that the image is slightly slanted.. maybe you can tilt the RHS up a little bit it might work better? overall, i feel more emphasis is places in the big chunks of trees on the LHS. maybe you can try to re-compose so that the road is more to the left instead? that might work? but what do i know? nice attempt!

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    the photo only shows a road bend. an endless road would have to show a long connected road, even if this is interspersed by hills. that composition would be more compelling as a title.

    but thats only my pov.

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    hi all,sorry for the small pic,the below is the bigger version of the shot



    thanks for all the input till far,pls keep your critics and comment in,really appreciate it.

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    Default Re: the endless roadway

    perhaps should stand more to your right and shoot?

    half your photo covered by the trees on the left.

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