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    Default outside my window.




    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    I would like to know where i can improve in panorama shots

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Basically i want to capture what it looks like outside my window

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken?
    This is my first attempt on Panorama.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I think that its kinda cool to show others what it looks like through your window.

    Thanks!

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    Paranoma attempt looks good
    Sharp and good contrast
    Properly exposed

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    No proper subject IMO
    Left side abruptly cut off
    Just looks like a well-taken paranomic snapshot :/

    Cheers and happy new year! Keep shooting bro ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by derrickder View Post
    +
    Paranoma attempt looks good
    Sharp and good contrast
    Properly exposed

    -
    No proper subject IMO
    Left side abruptly cut off
    Just looks like a well-taken paranomic snapshot :/

    Cheers and happy new year! Keep shooting bro ^^
    Thanks
    if i turn shoot more to the left it would be my window already

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    Quote Originally Posted by appleshem View Post
    Thanks
    if i turn shoot more to the left it would be my window already
    You probably wanna leave out the bulging building on the left?

    Overall it really looks good..

    Keep shooting!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Adrian1987 View Post
    You probably wanna leave out the bulging building on the left?

    Overall it really looks good..

    Keep shooting!
    Yeah best to leave it out. Paranoma doesn't have to stretch from your extreme left too

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    Default Re: outside my window.

    thanks!! Will take note of that!

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    Default Re: outside my window.

    I would have taken more of the greens to balance out the picture a little

    Anyway out of curiosity, where's this place?

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    Quote Originally Posted by takafan View Post
    I would have taken more of the greens to balance out the picture a little

    Anyway out of curiosity, where's this place?
    Its outside my window
    Hougang, somewhere near IMH..

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    Default Re: outside my window.

    Exposure wise is ok and stitching is well done. Good job correcting the distortions. However I feel the composition can be improved, like including more of the greens below. Cutting off buildings abruptly above the base does not work well. Did you shoot in with your camera in landscape format? You can also try to shoot in portrait format to frame in more area vertically on a single row pan.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Override2Zion View Post
    Exposure wise is ok and stitching is well done. Good job correcting the distortions. However I feel the composition can be improved, like including more of the greens below. Cutting off buildings abruptly above the base does not work well. Did you shoot in with your camera in landscape format? You can also try to shoot in portrait format to frame in more area vertically on a single row pan.
    Noted yea its taken in landscape. will try it in portrait. will keep in mind

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