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    Default Peace within chaos..




    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    The message conveyed by the picture.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    To capture the contrasting mood of both subjects (person and birds).

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Morning, just being random.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I think the idea is there but am not sure how to accentuate it. The picture was not processed in anyway, as I hope to gather advice on how best to do it.

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    Default Re: Peace within chaos..

    I'm still learning too.. maybe you would want to crop away the left as the man doing his exercise is distracting.. and perhaps chang this into B & W.. ? Just feel that the pic may turn out to be more peaceful with B & W.. add a bit of grain..

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    Default Re: Peace within chaos..

    I sort of get what you're trying to convey, but I think the man is "lost" with so many birds.
    I'm imagining another shot with him in the foreground (thus, occupying more space in the photo) and the birds all taking off in the background.
    Your title is PEACE within CHAOS. So literally, peace should come first, and not be hidden away.
    Exploring! :)

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