Abandoned :B/W series

Stoned · 29th June 2004

Mostly shot at a traditional factory manufacturing haw slices in Peking. Comments appreciated as always

#1 : Wasteland

#2 : Wild Garden

#3 : Broken Traditions

#4 : Locked In

#5 : Locked Out

glt · 1st July 2004

I like #3. The crack in the glass features nicely against the blurred out background.

The rest don't do it for me. Lack of subject to hold interest.

Btw, What cam did you use? If you shot with film, what did you use?

Stoned · 1st July 2004

Thanks for the advice. Will try to work on it

Used my favourite FM2 with Kodak Max 400

espn · 1st July 2004

3rd shot best for me, but would have been better if the background is slightly in focus a bit more... blur but not too bokeh'd out.

Stoned · 1st July 2004

Hmm very true.

What i actually wanted was to show just enough detail but i think i ended up showing too little. Good point. Thanks!

Bluewater · 1st July 2004

agreed.. I like the 3rd pic too.. the crack glass captures the essense.. very deserted and forgotten place.

Witness · 2nd July 2004

yup....3 is a real keeper..

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29th June 2004	#1
Stoned Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Changi Posts: 4,376	Abandoned :B/W series Mostly shot at a traditional factory manufacturing haw slices in Peking. Comments appreciated as always #1 : Wasteland #2 : Wild Garden #3 : Broken Traditions #4 : Locked In #5 : Locked Out __________________ My Personal Folio (of random events and things)

1st July 2004	#2
glt Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 118	I like #3. The crack in the glass features nicely against the blurred out background. The rest don't do it for me. Lack of subject to hold interest. Btw, What cam did you use? If you shot with film, what did you use?

1st July 2004	#4
espn Deregistered Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Planet Nikon Posts: 22,045	3rd shot best for me, but would have been better if the background is slightly in focus a bit more... blur but not too bokeh'd out.

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Stoned Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Changi Posts: 4,376	Hmm very true. What i actually wanted was to show just enough detail but i think i ended up showing too little. Good point. Thanks! __________________ My Personal Folio (of random events and things)

1st July 2004	#6
Bluewater Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 85	agreed.. I like the 3rd pic too.. the crack glass captures the essense.. very deserted and forgotten place.