Cranes

CupNoodle · 29th June 2004

Up for ur comments and opinions.

SniperD · 29th June 2004

would it work better in BnW?

Minoxman · 29th June 2004

I like the word "cranes". The fonts. Sniper has a point.

fw007 · 29th June 2004

i think colour works fine for this image, the blue in the skies is a nice, deep blue, and the photo is already a very simplistic, almost monotone--just black and blue and white, with almost no other colours already.

nice, clean, simple photo...i just love the colours.

sensires · 29th June 2004

I agree with fw007

... the gradient of the sky is nice and there's quite enough contrast btwn the cranes' silhouette and the sky for most parts ... i think it's a nice take ... was there another angle for a shot of a single crane? - am trying to visualise if an even less cluttered shot would make a stronger pic ....

CupNoodle · 29th June 2004

Originally Posted by SniperD

would it work better in BnW?

yeah i gave Black and white a try...
this is how it is...

i still think that the coloured one looks better? what u think?

SniperD · 29th June 2004

To me, the BnW one stands out better. There's beauty in monochromes. Simple, cleancut tones and the meaning jumps out at you.

THe color one works oso just that the background is overexposed.

Try a little burning to the clouds. The top portion looks alittle cut-out which can be solved with burning some depth to it

geoyip · 29th June 2004

BnW for me

Nitrile · 29th June 2004

BnW works best for this one.
better still if you can clone out those buildings and leave just the cranes.

29th June 2004	#1
CupNoodle Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Auzzie Land Currently Posts: 54	Cranes Up for ur comments and opinions.

29th June 2004	#2
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	would it work better in BnW? __________________ EYE-DEAS

29th June 2004	#7
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	To me, the BnW one stands out better. There's beauty in monochromes. Simple, cleancut tones and the meaning jumps out at you. THe color one works oso just that the background is overexposed. Try a little burning to the clouds. The top portion looks alittle cut-out which can be solved with burning some depth to it __________________ EYE-DEAS

29th June 2004	#3
Minoxman Deregistered Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 391	I like the word "cranes". The fonts. Sniper has a point.

29th June 2004	#4
fw007 Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Jurong Posts: 449	i think colour works fine for this image, the blue in the skies is a nice, deep blue, and the photo is already a very simplistic, almost monotone--just black and blue and white, with almost no other colours already. nice, clean, simple photo...i just love the colours.

29th June 2004	#5
sensires Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 290	I agree with fw007 ... the gradient of the sky is nice and there's quite enough contrast btwn the cranes' silhouette and the sky for most parts ... i think it's a nice take ... was there another angle for a shot of a single crane? - am trying to visualise if an even less cluttered shot would make a stronger pic ....

29th June 2004	#8
geoyip Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 943	BnW for me

29th June 2004	#9
Nitrile Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: EastCoast Posts: 140	BnW works best for this one. better still if you can clone out those buildings and leave just the cranes.