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    1. In which area is critique or feedback to be given?
    Composition

    2. What were you hoping to achieve with this image?
    To show irony, the match that started the fire was eventually "eaten" by it

    3. Under what circumstance was the picture taken?
    In a kitchen stove at night , with a borrowed macro lens and tripod

    4. Thread-starter's personal thoughts about the image.
    I wasnt able to get smaller and more separated blue flames, turning down the gas made the flames look "weak"
    Last edited by ed9119; 27th December 2010 at 01:00 AM.
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    Default Re: Consumed by fire

    nothing wrong with the composition and the cold blues worked well with the flames too! everything filled the frame up nicely

    just wanted to say that the glowing match in the middle made for interesting viewing
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    nice shot! clone that black spot or dirt off would be gd too.

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    Default Re: Consumed by fire

    Pretty cool concept, you made a nice picture out of a simple thing that we see at home everyday. Maybe you could just PP away the dust spot and it'll look better.
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    I like it. Good job.

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    Very nice , it too tight crops above , nicer if we could see the top of fire as well .

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    Default Re: Consumed by fire

    Interesting! You brought out the irony indeed!

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    Very cool abstract ^^

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    nice!
    Good leaders don't just lead their men to victory, they lead them home.

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    thanks for all the comments ! maybe the top of the fire should have been included in the composition =) ...
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    Nice color and shape. You are good in selecting your subject.

    Is that a burning match on the right side? My sight ended there. I think the composition can be improve by using rule of third(or equivalent) on that thing. Perhaps you could zoom out a bit, include the top of the flame so that the burning match is placed lower on the frame. This is just a suggestion. As I could not see the entire image, hence it might not be relevant.

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