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    Default Vespa 150 Vintage

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    I hope to seek comments and critique on my composition work, colour management and if the exposure and DOF is ok.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    I hope to achieve a vintage feel out of this vaspa deco i saw at somerset 313.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Erm this picture is taken indoor in B&W initially. I then when ahead with some cropping and colour and exposure processing. Hope to seek professional advice on how i can further improve this photo and of course for my future shots.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I feel that something is missing from this photo but i don't know what it is. But generally i still like this picture myself alot thats the reason why this is the first photo i posted up on clubsnap. Hope all of you like it.


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    Last edited by johnnyailen; 6th December 2010 at 12:52 AM.

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    vespa. not vaspa.

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    Quote Originally Posted by eleveninth View Post
    vespa. not vaspa.
    Erm thz for pointing it out. My bad, think i kinda mis-spelled it =) will take note of it the next time.

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    nice! but i would like to see the full headlamp and not getting it cropped. would give it 9.8/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by sprintermauts View Post
    nice! but i would like to see the full headlamp and not getting it cropped. would give it 9.8/10
    Thanks so much for the kind words =)..erm i noticed the cut away portion for the head lamp as well, i think i was my composition and framing problem at that point of time when i took the picture. Didnt want to cut away the side mirror protion on the handle hence ended up compromising the head lamp. Didnt notice it until i got back home to process the photo. If theres a chance for me to pass by that place again i will try for another one =)

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    If you are able to try another perspective to avoid the background/items at top left corner of the photo, result should be better.
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    Quote Originally Posted by kwttan View Post
    If you are able to try another perspective to avoid the background/items at top left corner of the photo, result should be better.
    yup one of my fren reflected to me abt it before as well saying that it is an unnecessary distraction. Will try another one without the background and will be posting up again once i got it shot!! =D thz for the advice..

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    i like it ! The color and the composition. Keep it up 1

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    Quote Originally Posted by skybroodz View Post
    i like it ! The color and the composition. Keep it up 1
    Thank you for your kind words =) will continue working hard to produce better picture for everyone =D

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    Anymore comments? =)

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