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    Smile first try....

    just 2 pics which i wanna share and get comments (good or bad) from the experienced CSers in this part of the forum..... would like to improve....




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    I like the first pic. My suggestion is may be you can crop the top part a bit more, the pattern on top left corner is a bit distracting.
    The shape of water drop is lovely though

    The second pic is a bit boring for me. Yes it is sharp, the composition is balanced and the exposure is correct. But that's it... Still lacks something.. i can't put in words sorry

    Thanks for sharing

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brandon
    I like the first pic. My suggestion is may be you can crop the top part a bit more, the pattern on top left corner is a bit distracting.
    The shape of water drop is lovely though

    The second pic is a bit boring for me. Yes it is sharp, the composition is balanced and the exposure is correct. But that's it... Still lacks something.. i can't put in words sorry

    Thanks for sharing
    wat it lacks is maybe a sunbird resting on it.

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    the little star looks cutie on the water pic =)

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    thanx for ur comments guys.... will improve......

    cheers

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    wat lacks are words in the photos....drop the words on the borders...

    put it into the photo...make it a poster,,,

    juz my 2cts ..

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