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    Talking You are so Handsome



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Exposure and lightings


    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    trying to capture the truth moment when kids are playing, this is one of th 500 pictures which i think its the most natural

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    morning around 10+ at the zoo water theme park

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    i think its nice to capture the boy looking at the camera while the gers looking at him

    thanks everyone!
    Last edited by knoxknocks; 16th November 2010 at 06:10 PM.

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    Not a bad pic. I kind of like it.

    Would be nicer if you go for a 16:9 crop and crop out some of the empty space above and a little below.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jk1881 View Post
    It's a nice moment you captured. just about the right timing
    I'm trying to visualize (in my head) if adding some vignetting or soft-focus would help to direct attention to the boy's expression. Worth a try, just as an experiment.
    I think DD123 is on to something with regards to a tighter crop.
    Because you presented quite a small image, it doesn't quite grab the attention as well. Do try to crop off some unwanted space in order to have your subject take up more of the frame.

    Exposure is quite all right.
    Exploring! :)

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    thanks everyone


    [IMG] DSC_0385edit by jk1881, on Flickr[/IMG]
    Last edited by jk1881; 18th November 2010 at 04:14 PM.

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    I think it's a great capture of the moment and perhaps a bit of cropping would do the trick

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    Quote Originally Posted by jk1881 View Post
    thanks everyone



    DSC_0385edit by jk1881, on Flickr
    This looks better!
    Exploring! :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by jk1881 View Post
    thanks everyone
    Actually you should not have shaved off the space left of the boy. And you can shave off more from the top of the 3 kids... try a real 16:9 ratio.

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    [IMG] DSC_0385_1 by jk1881, on Flickr[/IMG]
    Last edited by jk1881; 19th November 2010 at 11:12 AM.

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    a fun moment. prefer more space on the RIGHT, actually, for balancing purposes. and 16:9 would work well here with a shorter focal length used in the first place.

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