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    Default Hair Maze




    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, perspective, etc...

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    I find the hair style of this child very interesting, looks like a maze. I managed to take front and size views of this child, somehow find side view is able to show his beautiful hair style.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    I was attending a community center event when I came across this child with a very nice haircut.

    Exposure Time: 1/30 sec
    Exposure Prog: Manual
    F-Number: f/2.8
    ISO Speed: 200

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I cropped this pic as there are people behind the scene. The pic shows only side view of the child, as I want to show most of his beautiful hair cut.
    Last edited by kokonut; 14th November 2010 at 06:53 PM.

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    Default Re: Hair Maze

    Very nice, artistic haircut. Wonder how it will look like if shoot from other perspective (back, top-down). Some distraction at the background.
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    Default Re: Hair Maze

    Too much distraction on the background. Might work better if you shoot close up directly behind the head filling up the frame

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